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101 Things in 1001 Days: Dusk/Twilight

Tuesday, February 06, 2007

Dusk/Twilight

I really enjoyed this prompt.

An owl hoots its tune
The clouds huddle together
The sun winks goodnight

As the sky displays
Its kaleidoscope of hues
The moon dances in

As the day closes
I shut its doors knowing that
Tomorrow awaits

Sleep steals in quietly
The thief feels familiar
I allow him in

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12 Comments:

Anonymous Brian said...

Thanks for stopping by and commenting.

Owls dancing and the moon hooting. :)

Great haiku.

Tuesday, February 06, 2007  
Blogger AnnieElf said...

Hooting, huddling, and winking. I totally loved that.

Tuesday, February 06, 2007  
Blogger Remiman said...

101,
Nice pictures!
I think we were on the same wavelink for a bit. ;-)

Tuesday, February 06, 2007  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

clouds huddling - lovely image.

Tuesday, February 06, 2007  
Blogger Mikim said...

Wonderful haikus! "The sun winks goodnight" made me smile :)

Tuesday, February 06, 2007  
Blogger Regina Clare Jane said...

These haikus are so descriptive and moving- very physical in feeling!
Just wonderful!

Tuesday, February 06, 2007  
Blogger paris parfait said...

I like "the moon dances in." Lovely series!

Tuesday, February 06, 2007  
Blogger daisies said...

these are so wonderful together and i especially love the second one ... such great imagery!

Tuesday, February 06, 2007  
Anonymous liquidquick said...

first one is cute, second one is excellent. in response to the dancing moon:

as she saunters by
her captivating movements
quench the sun's bright flame

Wednesday, February 07, 2007  
Blogger Tammy said...

You can tell you enjoyed the prompt because these were wonderful!

Wednesday, February 07, 2007  
Blogger Tiffany said...

I enjoyed all of these. Fantastic!

Thursday, February 08, 2007  
Anonymous Pearl said...

Like the last one. A bit whimsical and creative spin like Emily Dickenson.

Saturday, February 10, 2007  

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