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101 Things in 1001 Days: Roots/Connection

Monday, January 29, 2007

Roots/Connection


This week at One Deep Breath, we are asked to take a closer, more contemplative look at our connection with nature. Here are my connections...

1.
Mother Earth
We take, plunder, grab
Feeding off you hungrily
Till it all runs out
2.
A field of flowers
Small, bright, delicate
Your colours give me pleasure
Soft scents on the breeze

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11 Comments:

Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

Your first haiku is all too true, sadly. The second one is lovely.

Monday, January 29, 2007  
Blogger Remiman said...

101,
Oh woman, you are so right on with "We take, plunder, grab
Feeding off you hungrily
Till it all runs out"
Well done. And a last bit of sweetness to temper the first.
rel

Monday, January 29, 2007  
Anonymous get zapped said...

You said it all, so simply. It is a horrible thing we do to our mother. Here is an interesting article that is more saddening:

Nice ku's.

Tuesday, January 30, 2007  
Blogger getzapped said...

Oops, the link didn't show,,,
http://www.guardian.co.uk/usa/story/0,,2001692,00.html

Tuesday, January 30, 2007  
Blogger Regina Clare Jane said...

Two very contrasting haiku's... makes us wonder if there will be any fields of flowers left...

Tuesday, January 30, 2007  
Anonymous Paris Parfait said...

These are both beautiful; the first one, sad but true.

Tuesday, January 30, 2007  
Blogger Tammy said...

You nailed societies greed in that first line, yet brought us back to nature's beauty. The contrast is a great reminder.

Tuesday, January 30, 2007  
Blogger Liza Lee Miller said...

Very thoughtful haikus. The first one is so sad and so true. Very powerful stuff.

Thank you for the hope offered by the second one.

Tuesday, January 30, 2007  
Blogger Elspeth said...

That first haiku is unfortunately frighteningly true.

Wednesday, January 31, 2007  
Blogger Becca said...

Very powerful haiku, with a lovely contrasting message. Well done!

Wednesday, January 31, 2007  
Anonymous Sandy said...

Nature as our provider, and nature as a source of beauty. Two good view of our mother.

Wednesday, January 31, 2007  

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