First Love
It was hot
It was sweet
It was short
It wasn't meant to be
It hurt
It still does...
posted by hundred and one at 7:34 pm
Friday, May 26, 2006
It was hot
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19 Comments:
This says so much in so few words. Wonderful! Isn't it odd how often love is connected with pain?
so much in so few words.
thats the way i like it.
:)
With just a few words you were able to express so much. Love it!
i really loved this post. like the others said: so few words, so much meaning.
Wonderfully concise but so expressive. Thanks.
We don't need to say a lot to SAY A LOT. In just a few words, you captured it all.
thanks for the visit... I like your blog!
perfectly simple, honest and resonates with all of us.
well done!
xo,
boho
I RELATE. Great post!
simple and honest. you described how i feel about mine!
the depths love can take you to in a heartbeat
Wow!
Yeah, that sums it up. Very to the point and wonderful. So far, my favorite post on the subject!
hey, how did you get inside my mind? That's perfect.
Fantastic! Short and poignant.
By withholding all the personal detail it's possible for us all to paint ourselves into this, and, yup, there I am! Gorgeous.
Jx
I keep coming back to read this poem. It hurts like hell.
a lot of us have been there but what a shame it was your first love - and it still hurts! time and true love is the healer, as they say.
great post!
Thank you everyone for your kind, kind comments. I am overwhelmed and very moved by the response and feelings it provoked in you. As simple as the words are, I found it quite difficult to write as it forced me to confront some long buried and sometimes painful memories.
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