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101 Things in 1001 Days: Subtle Change

Monday, January 08, 2007

Subtle Change

1.

Skin stretched taut
Harboring the life beneath
Each day subtle change

2.

The room stands empty
Colour peels off aging walls
My paintbrush beckons

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8 Comments:

Blogger susanlavonne said...

It's been quite a while since I was pregnant but still your haiku resonated with me as though it were yesterday...thanks for the lovely reminder.
Also, the contrast of the second one is terrific and written so cleverly.

Monday, January 08, 2007  
Blogger jblack designs said...

Great job! The first is so immediate and memorable. I love the image of skin harboring life.

jb

Tuesday, January 09, 2007  
Blogger Roswila said...

Skin stretched taut
Harboring the life beneath
Each day subtle change

Lovely! Reminds me of a ku I wrote based on a dream:

little footprints raise
on my friend's pregnant belly
a new path

Tuesday, January 09, 2007  
Blogger paris parfait said...

Such fabulous haiku! I remember well that time of pregnancy. And a room needing paintedis a constant attraction for me - I'm always thinking about changing a room's look and paint is the easiest way.

Tuesday, January 09, 2007  
Blogger daisies said...

oh wow .. these are amazing, love the contrast between the two ...

Tuesday, January 09, 2007  
Anonymous Sandy said...

I didn't get the link between the the poems until I went back and reread them. Nice.

Tuesday, January 09, 2007  
Blogger Tammy said...

Loved them both and they bring back great memories. Very creative!

Tuesday, January 09, 2007  
Blogger Jone said...

Love both of these and the little snippet they tell.

Wednesday, January 10, 2007  

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