Weathering/Aging
1.
Fine lines proudly worn
Feathery patterns of life
My road maps of time
2.
Perfect medium rare steak
Bite into it chomp down, bliss
Crunch! Just lost a tooth
Labels: Haiku
posted by hundred and one at 4:02 pm
Wednesday, December 27, 2006
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7 Comments:
both are wonderful and in different ways...i especially like the "feather patterns" (the lyrical quality more than the reality on my face, mind you :-)
The first one really speaks to me - the second makes me cringe! Good job.
I'm beginning to relate to the first (ack!) And hopefully the second is far off yet. Great job with this week's prompts.
I love the line 'my road maps of time'. The second haiku I don't want to think about, I have a dental appointment very soon and I hope my teeth will stay just exactly where they are....
101,
"Road maps of time" beauty in all things, and you find them.
rel
Love the sense of humor of the 2nd one.
feathery patterns of life...so perfectly describes both the physical reality of how life leaves traces and of how the patterns of our lives are like spider webs. great job. thanks.
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