Spicy Fibs
Before today, I had never heard of a Fibonacci Sequence so these are truly first attempts – so excuse the poor quality of the poems. I shall be trying my hand at writing some more poems using this sequence. Writing these left me feeling pretty hungry though!Scotch Bonnet
Red
Scotch
Bonnet
Fiery
Burning, peppery heat
Small fruit that packs a punch
By the Beach
White
Sand
Burning
Hot sun
Tucking into
Exquisitely made peppered shrimp
Labels: Fibs, Haiku, One Deep Breath
posted by hundred and one at 7:24 pm
16 Comments:
These are lovely! I especially like the first one - "small fruit that packs a punch" is a great ending line.
I think they are wonderful, and capture the essence of spicy.
How wonderful. Especially the first one.
Great spicy fibs! But what's a Scotch Bonnet in this context - I live in Scotland and feel this is something i know but I've never heard of it??
I think you did a great job! I especially loved the second one... I can just picture it...
These are great. I really like the first one, perfect description!
Those are terrific, first attempt or not! I really like the first one, which sounds delicious!
My mouth is burning! Great job on both of these!
Wow, I'd never heard of that fruit...cool fibs!
Great spicey fibs! This was my first attempt at trying them out as well. They are fun aren't they?
Now that is spicy! Great job.
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When you have poetry in your heart it just finds a way to come out. Nic work.
rel
Red enchantment and a recipe. A visual and taste sensation.
some words just belong together...red scotch bonnet, fiery...makes me want to say them over & over. And isn't it fun when a little word like fiery can be three syllables...creates a balance somehow...nicely done.
Delightful! You seemed to have gotten the knack!
Oooh! I'm intrigued. You've whetted my appetite.
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