Colour(ful)
The Rose Bush
They shut their buds tight
Colours yet to be revealed
Secrets hid within
Young Love
She spots him staring
From across the room, she smiles
Red heat stains her cheeks
My Garden (a fib)*
Red
Green
Yellow
My garden
A mass of colour
Sitting happily side by side
*Naturally my garden doesn’t look like this at the moment, but it does in the summer. :)
They shut their buds tight
Colours yet to be revealed
Secrets hid within
Young Love
She spots him staring
From across the room, she smiles
Red heat stains her cheeks
My Garden (a fib)*
Red
Green
Yellow
My garden
A mass of colour
Sitting happily side by side
*Naturally my garden doesn’t look like this at the moment, but it does in the summer. :)
Labels: Haiku, One Deep Breath
posted by hundred and one at 8:59 pm
11 Comments:
Simply beautiful... loved it!
101,
Nicely done!
I like the second one in particular.
rel
I love the buds one. I sometimes wonder if inside the flowers are changing their minds about what colour to wear. Perhaps they go through a few choices before they actually bloom!
Is this your garden? Or is love blooming?
I like the transition for the haiku to fib.
The first one is wonderful, I love to think about what is going on inside the buds.
These are wonderful - I especially like the second one. Well done.
These are great. I especially like the red cheeks. Made me smile warmly. Nice fib, too.
All were so well done but I admit a preference for the second one! I remember that feeling...
These are all so well done, and each one on a different subject!
Loved them!
wonderful! especially liked #2!
These were all lovely and now I'm dying for my bulbs to burst open!
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